Suggestions:

1. When you write a headline, put some action into it, to pull the reader into the story. Use details, color, humor, suspense, etc. – experiment with sports headlines, take a look at the sports pages for ideas.

2. Break up your stories into several paragraphs. It’s hard for people to read one long post – too much gray text. Also drop some illustrations, photos etc. in, for color and interest.

3. Proofread your posts for typos, errors, etc.

I just hope that when I come to your games, I don’t get injured either! Anyway… GO ICE!